outside
eaves dropping rain
then
a torrent
(no gutters)
inside
sound of rain
on roof
makes river
plummeting down
(no gutters)
outside
Florida squall
passes over
lightning strike
tree down
then gone
(no gutters)
inside
sound of dripping
from ceiling
must have
a leak
_____________
dVerse quadrille on eavesdropping. Had a fast storm the other day.
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I like the drip-drop of that repeating phrase, much like rain itself.
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I enjoyed your Florida squall, Jane, which was made more evocative by the repeated sound, and reminded me how much I love listening to rain – but not a leak, we’ve had our fair share of those!
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Sorry for a leak, but I do enjoy the rain and your post.
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