Florida Squall


eaves dropping rain


a torrent

(no gutters)


sound of rain

on roof

makes river

plummeting down

(no gutters)


Florida squall

passes over

lightning strike

tree down

then gone

(no gutters)


sound of dripping

from ceiling

must have

a leak


dVerse quadrille on eavesdropping. Had a fast storm the other day.

Florida Squall

3 thoughts on “Florida Squall

  1. I enjoyed your Florida squall, Jane, which was made more evocative by the repeated sound, and reminded me how much I love listening to rain – but not a leak, we’ve had our fair share of those!


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