let me count each kiss
placed head to toe with love
calm after the thrust
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dVerse prompt on erotica
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let me count each kiss
placed head to toe with love
calm after the thrust
_____________
dVerse prompt on erotica
wordshophop 
Beautiful! Thank you so much for writing to the prompt ❤️
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Your haiku captured the gist and essence of making love Jane, well written.
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From head to toe, I love this.
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Short and right to the point. So good.
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I like your “quickie” haiku 🙂
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LOL
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Beautifully written, short and sweet!
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I like this, the upward thrust at the end.
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Those first two lines make this so much longer, and lasting, than just those three lines. Well done.
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Lovely senyru. So much said in so few words!
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Every aspect… and that wonderful calm
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I love non traditional Haikus like this!
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