Stand still
only sounds are inner ones
a beat and a breath
at 10,000 feet
Mt Rainier base camp
so quiet
until a boom
20,000 feet above
silence then sound
traveling
Stand still
only sounds are inner ones
a beat and a breath
at 10,000 feet
Mt Rainier base camp
so quiet
until a boom
20,000 feet above
silence then sound
traveling
What a wonderful take on the prompt. Even in the midst of total silence there are interruptions that shake us to the core! Great poem. I can picture this in my mind.
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Thanks for the great prompt
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I like how that sound is travelling even up on high ~ Good one Jane ~ Thanks for joining in.
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It makes me wonder if they were safe in the base camp.
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