
In the sunlight
those wooden pins hold
against the wind
clipped on tight
holding cloth and line
blue shirt bellows out
it is sailing
across a sea of grasses
moored in this place
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dVerse prompt to pick a picture of the wind and write a poem
I love how you captured the movement in your words, and the dreams of that blue shirt.
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Lovely!
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You capture an important aspect of the painting in your poem, its rooted sense of place. Nicely done!
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Beauty in nine lines …. sigh.
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Wonderful Jane… 🙂
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Lovely analogy of sailing.
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The imagery of sailing is very good.
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Beautiful word-painting, Jane!
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A lovely snapshot of the painting, an imagery almost in extended haiku style..
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