She knew the temperature was hot
it’s what was sought
to melt the glass
do not use brass
Sprinkled particles on copper
melded proper
kiln did bake it
time to exit
just when her piece passes the door
brooch falls on floor
I told you so—
burning the toe
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dVerse prompt— one minute poem of 60 syllables, usually concerning an event that can happen in a minute
Oh ! not a nice ending to all that hard work.
A nice minute story though
Much love
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Oouch on the ending. Good work on the form.
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Painful ending
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The ending is good ! Beautifully written! Thanks 💕😊👌
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