Truth to rule in times of riot
that is poetry
to find a line bold yet not
making all words dance
swirling images
fluttering gutted like fish
die on the pages
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dVerse prompt to write a seguidilla— messed up the scheme but committed to the change
“fluttering like gutted fish” …. how incredibly graphic!!
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Bold and balanced ~~ lovely write.
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Admiring that second part of the poem starting with:
swirling images
fluttering gutted like fish
Thanks for joining in! Happy weekend.
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The poem is great fun to read and sometimes best to forget the form.
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