“The clear vowels rise like balloons.” Sylvia Plath
Deeper are the diphthongs
So bound
Neither the o or the u can rise
In their own sound
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dVerse prompt taking the end of a poem (in this case Plath’s last line of her poem Morning Song) and using it to make a beginning. My mind went to diphthongs and how the vowels no longer make their own sound. Sylvia Plath was such a great writer but so bound. This poem makes me want to cry.
I still hope the vowels can lift us from the weight of the consonants
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Clever dissection of the word under scrutiny
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Oh, this poem just drops like clear crystal. That one powerful image is absolutely enough.
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Thoroughly enjoyed this …. you say so much with so few words.
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Such power in the brevity of your verse! 💝
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