opening
departing
I kept saying
painting
staving
waiting
living
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dVerse prompt erasure poem of Late Ripeness by Czeslaw Milosz and rebelling against a poetry teacher who said not to use the “ing” words
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wordshophop 
Bravo for your rebellion. Why not. Poetry allows us to play with rules.
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Great to oppose a rule… without ing you cannot sing.
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It is nice to have rules so one can break them.
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