French platoon

Pack of riders

Save energy riding close




The peloton travels

As birds flying in formation

Slip off



Develop fluid center

dVerse prompt on erasure


5 thoughts on “Peloton

  1. I have the idea that your source is non-fiction and, if so, the result is especially surprising and poetic, as PeterFrank says above. But then poetry is words and that is all it takes, along with the poetic eye. Maybe I will try one from one of my old nursing texts.

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