Concrete in the veins
Announce the hard facts of day
Leaves fall to the ground
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Leaf created by nature, concrete and me
Concrete in the veins
Announce the hard facts of day
Leaves fall to the ground
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Leaf created by nature, concrete and me
Love your autumn’s haiku ~
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I love this haiku. Veins in leaves and me….to think about
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Concrete in the veins…great line ❤️
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Lovely.
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Thanks:)
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Oooh! Nice.
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Gravity seems more intense in fall.
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I liked how all three lines had suggestions of hardness: concrete, facts and ground.
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It’s like ashes, ashes we all fall down! Nice artwork too!
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Nice looking concrete leaf.
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